Short Stories



 
Halloween Night

A mottling of blue, powder-puff clouds curtained the moon. When I left home, it had been free of encumbrance, a demi-moon, torn in two as if by an invisible, galactic predator.
Now as I walk this deserted lane, two spaces open in the clouds, pale light from the moon creating glowing eyes, evil orbs peering down at me from the heavens. I walk faster as a corner of the moon appeared in one of the eyes in the clouds, creating a malevolent, one-eyed presence.
Shivering, I turned my eyes to the ground and kept walking.
I had to know.
            Not wanting to be seen, I’d parked my car at the end of the cornfield. I moved stealthily toward Jonathan’s cabin, where I suspected my love to be snuggled in with another woman. Did he have the bed scattered with rose petals for her as he had for me on our first night? Was the bedroom aglow with candlelight?
I had to know.
            Something snapped in the field beside me. I started, but kept up my pace. The soft, crinkly rustling of the autumn corn seemed to whisper, “Go back.”  I walked faster. A dead tree, its branches black and gnarled against the sky, reached for me, its branches crusty, jagged tentacles. I gasped, but continued my journey forward.
 I had to know.
            There were no lights on in the cabins near Jonathan’s. The frigid fall air and steady drizzle had kept the weekenders away. The mossy, damp scent of the lake reached my nostrils and I could hear a gentle lapping at the shoreline behind his cottage. Soft light flowing from the windows barely illuminated the approach to the front door.
I knew every inch of the yard, from the rusted mailbox, to the weather-beaten window boxes Jonathan filled with yard tools rather than planting with flowers. I peered over one. My breathing ceased at the sight of my beloved with his arms around another woman, their lips melding together in a passionate kiss.
My mouth burned with the acrid taste of jealousy. I longed to crawl into the woods and let the creatures of the earth have me, allow dead leaves to form a shroud around my wasting body.
            Now I knew.
            Running back to the road, I stumbled.  I’d nearly fallen on the tines of an old, wood-handled pitchfork; my beloved had a habit of leaving tools lying about. As quietly as possible, I leaned it against the shed where no one could step on it and injure themselves. But why should I care if Jonathan or his slut pricked their feet? I pictured her with blood drizzling from dainty, pink toes, her long, wavy hair falling over her pained face.
            Jonathan never used to lock his doors. He probably still didn’t, in spite of the unfair restraining order he’d filed against me. I had to make him understand the depth of my love for him. I picked up the pitchfork, caressing its rugged shaft in my trembling hands and moved toward the house.
I’m coming, my darling. Now you’ll know.



8 comments:

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    1. Thanks Victoria! I wrote that story when I took a creative writing class a couple years ago. I never finished the class (there was too much emphasis on poetry for me) but I did get that great story done for a class project.
      Nice to have you visit the blog, and appreciate your words!
      Marla

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  2. "Halloween" is very noir, Marla. Perfect for the holiday. Enjoyed it!

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    1. Thanks, Jean!
      You have a beautiful website and neat book covers. Loved your author photo and bio.
      Very nice. I'm honored that you took the time to read my story.
      Marla

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  3. Oh... it finished.
    now I have to retreat to my writing space (otherwise known as my head) and drag something in the noir vein out for inspection. I Like your work

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    1. Thanks Ellen!
      I wrote that story when I was taking a creative writing class. Good luck with your writing!
      Have a nice weekend,
      Marla

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  4. Marla,
    Gripping story with a nice attention getting turn-around at the end. Excellent work...love your spooky adjectives!

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    1. Thanks, Cynthia!
      I wrote this story while I was taking a creative writing course, hence the detailed descriptions. Glad you liked it. Have a great Sunday,
      Marla

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