Halloween Night
A mottling of blue, powder-puff clouds
curtained the moon. When I left home, it had been free of encumbrance, a
demi-moon, torn in two as if by an invisible, galactic predator.
Now as I walk this
deserted lane, two spaces open in the clouds, pale light from the moon creating
glowing eyes, evil orbs peering down at me from the heavens. I walk faster as a
corner of the moon appeared in one of the eyes in the clouds, creating a
malevolent, one-eyed presence.
Shivering, I turned
my eyes to the ground and kept walking.
I had to know.
Not
wanting to be seen, I’d parked my car at the end of the cornfield. I moved stealthily
toward Jonathan’s cabin, where I suspected my love to be snuggled in with
another woman. Did he have the bed scattered with rose petals for her as he had
for me on our first night? Was the bedroom aglow with candlelight?
I had to know.
Something
snapped in the field beside me. I started, but kept up my pace. The soft, crinkly
rustling of the autumn corn seemed to whisper, “Go back.” I walked faster. A dead tree, its
branches black and gnarled against the sky, reached for me, its branches crusty,
jagged tentacles. I gasped, but continued my journey forward.
I had to know.
There
were no lights on in the cabins near Jonathan’s. The frigid fall air and steady
drizzle had kept the weekenders away. The mossy, damp scent of the lake reached
my nostrils and I could hear a gentle lapping at the shoreline behind his
cottage. Soft light flowing from the windows barely illuminated the approach to
the front door.
I knew every inch
of the yard, from the rusted mailbox, to the weather-beaten window boxes Jonathan
filled with yard tools rather than planting with flowers. I peered over one. My
breathing ceased at the sight of my beloved with his arms around another woman,
their lips melding together in a passionate kiss.
My mouth burned
with the acrid taste of jealousy. I longed to crawl into the woods and let the
creatures of the earth have me, allow dead leaves to form a shroud around my
wasting body.
Now
I knew.
Running
back to the road, I stumbled. I’d
nearly fallen on the tines of an old, wood-handled pitchfork; my beloved had a
habit of leaving tools lying about. As quietly as possible, I leaned it against
the shed where no one could step on it and injure themselves. But why should I
care if Jonathan or his slut pricked their feet? I pictured her with blood
drizzling from dainty, pink toes, her long, wavy hair falling over her pained
face.
Jonathan
never used to lock his doors. He probably still didn’t, in spite of the unfair
restraining order he’d filed against me. I had to make him understand the depth
of my love for him. I picked up the pitchfork, caressing its rugged shaft in my
trembling hands and moved toward the house.
I’m coming, my darling. Now you’ll know.
Wow, Marla. Great story!
ReplyDeleteThanks Victoria! I wrote that story when I took a creative writing class a couple years ago. I never finished the class (there was too much emphasis on poetry for me) but I did get that great story done for a class project.
DeleteNice to have you visit the blog, and appreciate your words!
Marla
"Halloween" is very noir, Marla. Perfect for the holiday. Enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jean!
DeleteYou have a beautiful website and neat book covers. Loved your author photo and bio.
Very nice. I'm honored that you took the time to read my story.
Marla
Oh... it finished.
ReplyDeletenow I have to retreat to my writing space (otherwise known as my head) and drag something in the noir vein out for inspection. I Like your work
Thanks Ellen!
DeleteI wrote that story when I was taking a creative writing class. Good luck with your writing!
Have a nice weekend,
Marla
Marla,
ReplyDeleteGripping story with a nice attention getting turn-around at the end. Excellent work...love your spooky adjectives!
Thanks, Cynthia!
DeleteI wrote this story while I was taking a creative writing course, hence the detailed descriptions. Glad you liked it. Have a great Sunday,
Marla