Tuesday, November 26, 2013

What new authors can learn from reading Storm Front

John Sandford’s Storm Front

What new authors can learn from reading Storm Front







            I’ve been a Sandford fan from day one. His Prey series has been my favorite; I eagerly awaited each new release. Unfortunately, some of his later works have not been favorites, and with Storm Front, Sandford’s latest, the author has hit an all time low. If I hadn’t been a long-time fan, I’d never have finished the book.
            Since The DaVinci Code became a blockbusting success, everyone’s writing books about an ancient relic that if made public, would change the world of religion, as we know it. For me, most of them are nothing but 400 page chase scenes. Not my personal taste, but they have become extremely popular.
            Who could imagine Sandford fitting this type of storyline into a Virgil Flowers novel! Storm Front stars Virgil Flowers, a character who, like Lucas Davenport before Sandford married him off, is a super-sleuth, and super-successful womanizer. The story opens when Flowers is assigned a case involving an ancient inscribed stone, whose message, if shared with the world, would create chaos in the middle east. The man who stole the stone from a dig in Israel is from Minnesota and is known to have returned to the US with it. Flowers is assigned the case, begins looking for the man, finds the thief missing (of course!) and within a matter of days, he encounters at least four factions (all armed and dangerous) that are also in pursuit of the stone, which is estimated to be worth millions of dollars.
            Now, despite the theme of the book, the story does captivate the reader. Flowers is an interesting character, and I did enjoy his investigation and interplay with the people seeking the stone. About halfway through, however, something happened, that if I weren’t a devoted Sandford fan, I would have quit reading the book.
            When Flowers finally gets the stone in his possession, did he find a vault to put it in? A bank? A police station? A Brinks truck? People have been shot at, nearly killed, assassins are part of the chase, (not to mention, once more, the thing is worth millions), and Flowers takes it home with him and stores it in his dishwasher. The reader is expected to believe this character, solver of all crimes, would be that stupid. It’s no surprise to the reader that the stone is stolen during the night.
            After that I had a hard time forcing myself to finish reading the book, but I finally made it through, extremely disappointed with the story.
            I couldn’t help but think of the valuable lessons new authors can learn from Storm Front.
1.    Sandford’s writing has two huge strengths: interesting characters and rich dialogue. These two things that can go a long way toward making a so-so story an interesting read.
2.    No matter how hackneyed the theme, Sandford, at least in the first half of the book, captivates the reader, proving once again the old adage: there are no new stories—just new ways of crafting them for the reader.
3.    Be warned that the John Sandfords of the literary world are the only ones who can get away with a character doing something as idiotic as storing the relic at home. Beware of making your characters behave as if they had an IQ the size of their waistline, or as a fellow writer puts it, too dumb to live.

Dear Readers,
Long before I became an author myself, I was a reader, and still am. I love suspense and follow most of the great suspense authors. I’m making an effort to learn from the books I read and to share these lessons with you.
Thanks for visiting and have a wonderful Thanksgiving,

Marla

9 comments:

  1. Ah, the value of reading. You're constantly learning what to and what NO TO do. I think any serious author had better take on a serious regiment of novels to further their study--both obscure and best sellers.

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    1. Yes! Totally agree. Reading (and studying your genre while doing it) is an important pastime for new authors. In doing so, I can justify my time spent reading. :)
      Nice to hear from you, Crystal. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving!
      Marla

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    2. Writer Dave Here,
      I am going over the classics now, some I have read and many I knew about but really didn't get the hidden meaning. I've learnt a lot from going over the classics recently.
      I've learnt about writing and have collected the insights they have that are relevant even today!

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  2. Sandford made a mistake marrying off Lucas. I read a couple after that and found the character less interesting. Like Virgil, but after a few of those, I decided there are better books out there I haven't read. Big authors get passes we never will. Kinda pisses me off.

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    1. Me too, Polly! Once they have a following, the big authors' fans tend to be forgiving. I have noticed though, that Storm Front was not on the NYT top ten list very long and had an awfully large percentage of poor reviews on AZ.
      I liked Davenport better, too, when he was single, although I get weary of male protagonists who bed every attractive woman they come across, and at least are invited to be bed every woman they meet. Gets tiresome for female readers, but maybe he has a big audience of male followers.
      Happy Thanksgiving, Polly,
      Marla

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  3. I love Virgil Flowers.
    I worry about that as well, putting the character in trouble because of a poor choice. I want ALL my characters to be smarter than THAT. lol

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  4. Me too, love Flowers and always been a big Sandford fan. Hate to see his books deteriorate! Sometimes your characters do stupid things but I think the trick is to have a good explanation for why they're doing it or at least have them criticizing themselves after the deed and wishing they'd done things differently.
    I was in your area for an arbitration hearing yesterday. Cold as it is here! Stay warm.
    Marla

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  5. Commented long time back that Davenport's sex scenes are boring but Flowers' are fun. Personal comment by author? Did he remarry in real life??

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    1. No idea about Sandford and marriage. Can't really recall sex scenes in his books so they must not be overdone! My personal annoyance is that both Flowers and Davenport NEVER meet a woman who doesn't want to bed them.
      I prefer suspense to be just that, suspense. Although I have read some suspense lately that adds pretty explicit scenes.
      Nice to hear from you Virginia, keep reading,
      Marla

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